caligryphy ([info]caligryphy) wrote,
@ 2005-12-16 19:42:00
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Ficlet.
I'm digging in my hard drive tonight.

Ficlet. Pretty much gen, but pre-RL/SS if you want. A bit melancholy.




“Happy Birthday, Severus,” he said.

“What?”

Remus turned, one hand balancing a saucer, the other adding the third lump of sugar to his morning tea, and met a pair of almost—startled black eyes. “Happy Birthday. …It is your birthday, isn’t it?”

“What?” he mumbled again, before his sneer managed to resurface. “Yes. Of course.”

“Well, then,” Remus shrugged, “Happy Birthday.”

Severus blinked. “And?”

“And what?”

The Potions master folded his arms. “What is it you want—Lupin?”

The corner of Remus’ mouth twitched upward before he could school his expression back to neutral. Severus really had no idea how funny he was. “Nothing. Just saying—Happy Birthday. That’s all.”

A brow arched imperceptibly.

The werewolf shook his head. “So suspicious.”

“When I’ve got a reason.”

For a moment, Remus thought Severus was going to lunge at him. Until the war ended, all he’d ever seen in the man’s eyes was fury, cold and hot, but now… now, he often seemed tired. Sometimes, he didn’t even bother to snap at students.

It rather reminded him of a wounded dog he'd once seen by the side of the road, snuffling and whining softly into the dust, too broken to twitch its tail and flick away the settling flies.

The taller man did not lunge. He leaned closer and closer until they were nearly touching, nearly—

Severus reached around him and plucked a teacup from the table.

Fathomless eyes stared into his own. “Severus, I…” he began, without knowing what he would say.

“Lupin.”

His breath caught. “Yes?”

“You are blocking the sugar bowl.”

Remus swallowed, nodded, and stepped aside.




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[info]ook
2005-12-16 04:56 pm UTC (link)
Very nice! I liked the almost-almost possibility of a potential kiss there. :)

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[info]caligryphy
2006-01-01 12:25 am UTC (link)
This is an almost-beginning to another story that didn't happen. (Or hasn't happened yet. Whatever.) Thanks. ;)

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[info]rexluscus
2005-12-16 05:38 pm UTC (link)
Severus really had no idea how funny he was. Yours in particular--both funny, and unaware of it. I love Lupin trying not to laugh.

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[info]caligryphy
2006-01-01 12:26 am UTC (link)
Poor Lupin. *Pats head* :) Thanks.

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[info]odogoddess
2005-12-16 06:04 pm UTC (link)
Ooh... I was almost hoping for a lick or a kiss from Remus. Yummy! Love the USTiness of this little ficlet. :) Nice job!

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[info]the_reda
2005-12-16 07:09 pm UTC (link)
bwuhahahah
NICE icon

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[info]odogoddess
2005-12-16 11:00 pm UTC (link)
Thanks. :)

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[info]caligryphy
2006-01-01 12:26 am UTC (link)
It's the beginning of a fic that pretty much didn't start, or hasn't started yet. :) Maybe someday. Thanks!

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[info]the_reda
2005-12-16 06:49 pm UTC (link)
I Love fics where Snape needs a hug.

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[info]caligryphy
2006-01-01 12:27 am UTC (link)
Snape doesn't get enough of them. I'm a big fan of Snape hugs. :)

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[info]maggiehoneybite
2005-12-16 07:30 pm UTC (link)
Lovely, funny and wistful. (All the things Snupin should be).

Have friended you, by the way. I hope that's okay. :)

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[info]caligryphy
2006-01-01 12:27 am UTC (link)
Join the party; there's cheap wine over there! Thanks!

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[info]etrangere
2005-12-17 04:10 am UTC (link)
lovely ! I like that bittersweet atmosphere

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[info]caligryphy
2006-01-01 12:28 am UTC (link)
Thank you. (I like your icon. I keep stumbling back onto that comic strip, and it's still so damn cute.)

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[info]ave_ebony
2005-12-17 06:18 am UTC (link)
mmm, poor Severus. Do you plan to write more and let Remus make the world better for him? Please, make it longer... **pleading eyes**

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[info]caligryphy
2006-01-01 12:28 am UTC (link)
Got one big fic in line before it, but it was the beginning to another, not-yet-written fic. Maybe someday. :)

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[info]josanpq
2005-12-17 12:22 pm UTC (link)
You're just being mean to us. Stop snickering.

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[info]caligryphy
2006-01-01 12:29 am UTC (link)
*Snicker*

...What? :)

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[info]matyas_adina
2005-12-17 12:35 pm UTC (link)
Lovely.

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[info]caligryphy
2006-01-01 12:29 am UTC (link)
*Bows* Thanks.

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